The background is a tad empty, yet still fitting. The art work is well done, emulates the show well while doing it's own thing. The facial expressions were especially funny and interesting. The ending was also quite unexpected but welcomed. Also, I especially like the design of the undead pony, as it mimics the source material (that of the fan-made flash game) perfectly! A great comic, from what clearly comes off as a great artist. The variety of word balloons was also used to the full potential, the undead pony's word balloon creepy and sinister looking, which is fitting. A+!
Vision - I have to say, I've always liked that undead OC pony if just because he's so goofy looking, very well executed.
Originality - It goes without saying that there's probably nobody with an OC like this.
Technique - Beautiful emulation of the My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic style. It almost looks vectored from the show itself.
Impact - I sure didn't expect that ending. Especially the incredibly humorous image of Scootaloo popping of the turtle head and making a very goofy face.
Other notes - If I could dock points for anything it'd be the note explaining that light banishes the undead. It somewhat stands to reason and I don't like that it needed to be explained to the reader. But I can't really find anywhere to dock points for that.