Vision - I do like these comics where cutie marks work in strange ways. Very comedic.
Originality - I don't think I've seen anyone else use cutie marks in this way.
Technique - Brilliant recreation of the show's style with the only real flaw being Pinkie's eyes at the end. While they are disturbing I don't really like the weird little lines that I guess are supposed to make her eyes look bloodshot and the pupils are rather under-detailed.
Impact - This comic is basically unforgettable. Very well made and funny, it definitely deserves a spot in the favorites of every MLP fan on deviantart.
Vision - In my opinion this comic adds a very comedic use of Pinkie's cutie mark.
Originality - This is very original in my book, seeing that I've never seen any other comic that utilizes cutiemarks in this fashion.
Technique - Awesome way of showing that crazy and zany things happen in MLP:FIM with an add on of a creepy yet enjoyable image, but the eyes in the last panel could have had more work on the pupil from where i stand.
Impact - I would add this to my favorites and i believe a lot of other MLP fans on deviantart would favorite this too if they thought it was worth it to them.