So I got in a little argument with my mother...
Basically, the usual situation is that she comes sometimes to force me into drawing some original, non-pony things over photographs, and I reluctantly do it.
This time, we got in a serious argument because of cartoony lines that are supposed to indicate motion. The general idea was following: one worm throws a book, other gets hit, and book rebounds off his face.
For some reason, she seemed almost furious because of my initial arrangement of those lines, based on what I usually saw in comics. She insisted to drop it in favor of a different arrangement, which seemed completely illogical to me.
Below you will find both versions, the top one being mine, and the bottom one being my mother's. Which arrangement is better? Which expresses the concept more clearly? Which is more logical and why?
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